tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821563841435577941.post5486350381015703696..comments2014-03-17T07:51:26.680-07:00Comments on MATT POTTER: Friday Flash Fiction #41 - for Friday 3rd September 2010Matt Potterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09407600665539926917noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821563841435577941.post-54669037358626688462010-09-09T08:31:49.196-07:002010-09-09T08:31:49.196-07:00You did a wonderful job. It makes me want to visit...You did a wonderful job. It makes me want to visit Germany again. My favorite part was the final line. :)Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821563841435577941.post-9400891078788623672010-09-08T18:20:25.804-07:002010-09-08T18:20:25.804-07:00Welcome to FFF, Matt
Very nice pacing and charact...Welcome to FFF, Matt<br /><br />Very nice pacing and character development in a very short amount of time. Look forward to reading more of your work.chad rohrbacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02108600205697375432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821563841435577941.post-66962403253609375102010-09-08T11:19:22.292-07:002010-09-08T11:19:22.292-07:00Like Cormac, I was intrigued with this tale - it h...Like Cormac, I was intrigued with this tale - it held my attention right to the end! Excellent characterisation and a very worthy first offering Matt! I hope you'll stick around so we can get to know more of your work. ;-)SueHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394307650434614637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821563841435577941.post-60965197229942332482010-09-08T09:55:32.768-07:002010-09-08T09:55:32.768-07:00Very well done! I liked the way you captured the c...Very well done! I liked the way you captured the casual nature of their conversation.Jenny Jenny Flanneryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07621715431584059448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821563841435577941.post-13346084439262477492010-09-08T08:09:32.835-07:002010-09-08T08:09:32.835-07:00I totally agree with Doc. The setting really adds...I totally agree with Doc. The setting really adds a whole other dimension to this tale. And, sometimes it's tough to pull off so much dialog, but you did it flawlessly. It really allows you to get to know the characters well. I really like how you incorporated the starter. Well done.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821563841435577941.post-2335267982845709072010-09-07T10:34:55.451-07:002010-09-07T10:34:55.451-07:00The setting and the language really make this tale...The setting and the language really make this tale shine. The characters make it engaging while the dialog gives it polish and verve. Well done.<br /><br />DocDochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16979621370660001312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4821563841435577941.post-4628233628650346412010-09-06T07:11:53.415-07:002010-09-06T07:11:53.415-07:00Welcome, Matt.
Excellent, especially...
"Bu...Welcome, Matt.<br /><br />Excellent, especially...<br /><br />"But it would never be that simple. Shona sees things in black and white and I like to look for the rainbow in everything. Which is interesting, because our takes as English-language foreigners living in Berlin – and Germany – are very different: she likes its structure and innate orderliness, and I love the rent-a-hippies."<br /><br />Well done, I haven't been this intrigued about a story of this type, since Fitzgerald's "Bernice Bobs Her Hair." By the time you read this, you will be on the author list and your story will go up Tuesday morning.Cormac Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02990698766444728760noreply@blogger.com